My poem, “Striking Out,” is online at The Good Men Project.
No model army
If my news writing classes over the last three semesters are any indication, fewer and fewer journalism students are reading newspapers or news magazines. This is not conjecture — ask the class and they will tell you (and have told me) that they get their news from social media, the Web, from a variety of sources both reliable and unreliable. And it is evident in their early efforts at news writing.
The issue is not their writing — most of my Rutgers students have a solid grasp of the various mechanical issues that seem to plague students in my freshmen classes at Middlesex County College. They can put a sentence together fairly well and link those sentences into solid paragraphs and so on.
The issue is that they are seeking to learn to use a form with which they have had little experience or contact. Not reading a newspaper — or even a newspaper on line — means that the structural components of news writing (good ledes, nut graphs, how to handle quotations) are all brand new to them. They have no reference points or models on which to build — or from which to steal — which is how all writers learn their craft. It adds a layer of difficulty to the already difficult processes of teaching and learning the news format.
Modeling, of course, is part of what we do in the classroom. I break down news articles every week for my students, attempting to show them the component parts and explain how they fit together. And they respond and they learn, but they are behind where they might have been were they regular readers of more traditional news and sports coverage. They are learning from scratch and many — hopefully most — of them will get where they need to go.
It must may take them a lot longer and a lot more effort to get there.
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Another bad idea for rating teachers
John Burzichelli is right that parent involvement makes for better students, but judging teachers based on whether parents engage with the school is pure nonsense.
A-2732, Burzichelli’s bill, calls on the state education commissioner to create standards for parentla involvement on which teachers would be judged, which can include “the parent’s responsiveness to communications initiated by the teacher; the parent’s participation in parent-teacher conferences; the student’s completion rate for homework; and the parent’s responsiveness in returning documents requiring the parent’s signature.”
Got that? A teacher potentially is going to be held accountable for the speed with which a parent fills out paperwork and gets it back to the school or whether a parent actually shows up for a conference.
There seems to be some support for Burzichelli’s bill — based on this story in MyCentralJersey.com, though, the structure of the story and some of the quotations raise questions about just how committed any of the educators quoted are to the bill. The focus of the story is on the importance of parental involvement — nearly everyone quoted talks about it and I don’t think you would find anyone who would disagree that it is better to engage parents than to not do so. But little attention is paid in the story to the elephant in the room — exactly how will teachers hold parent’s feet to the fire” — at least not until the final paragraph.
MyCentralJersey.com quotes Bruce Titen, who is the supervisor of mathematics and a school leader at Plainfield’s Frank J. Hubbard Middle School. Titen “called parental involvement a “very taboo” subject,” though it is “the No. 1 indicator for academic achievement in 95 percent of students, especially at the elementary and middle school levels.” Does he support this kind of legislation? Hard to say, but he does offer this comment:
“The quote given to me from numerous administrators from the time I was teaching,” Titen said, “was we can’t talk about what the parents do or don’t do at home because it’s not something in our control as a school system.”
The story never says whether Titen agrees with these previous administrators or not, though it implies that he does. More telling is that this is the only mention of what is likely to be a massive logistical problem. Teachers cannot control whether parents get involved. They can reach out. They can make the effort. But if a parent doesn’t care or, more likely, doesn’t have the time because he or she has to work, what is the teacher supposed to do?
I just don’t see how you can hold a teacher accountable for the things that go on outside of the classroom. We know, for instance, that students who get a good night’s sleep perform better in school, as do students who have healthy diets. Should these things be included in teachers’ evaluations, as well? What about making sure that students live in safe neighborhoods or that their parents are not economically forced to work multiple jobs?
We should be letting teachers do what they do best: Teach students, engage with students. And we should make sure they have the tools they need — which include money and top-notch facilities. We shouldn’t be blaming them for society’s larger failures.
If the goal is engaged parents, then let’s focus on the parents by enacting policies that make it easier for parents to be available to be engaged, starting with a fair economy that treats all work as valuable.
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Even a stopped clock named Alec Baldwin is right twice a day
Alec Baldwin announced very publicly yesterday — in a 5,000-word screed in New York Magazine — that he was taking his larger-than-life personality and petulant I’m-the-only-one-who-matters attitude and retiring from public life.
It’s hard to know what this means — is he forever forsaking guest spots on SNL or his absolutely brilliant turns in the Capital One credit card commercials? Or is he just going to keep a low profile and stop being a very public jerk? Hard to say and, really, does it matter?
Probably not, though I am intrigued by some of the criticisms he levels, especially at the liberal news media as typified by MSNBC. His critiques are not just the ravings of a lunatic or the parting shots of a wounded ego. Many of them are on target and deserve more than the dismissive wave the media is offering.
The relevant critiques are contained in this Salon sum-up — and thanks to Salon for providing an alternative to reading the entire, painful missive.
Here is what he had to say about MSNBC:
I watched MSNBC, prior to working there, very sporadically. Once I had signed a contract with them, I wanted to see more of what they were about. It turned out to be the same shit all day long. The only difference was who was actually pulling off whatever act they had come up with. Morning Joe was boring. Scarborough is neither eloquent nor funny. And merely cranky doesn’t always work well in the morning. Mika B. is the Margaret Dumont of cable news. I liked Chris Jansing a lot. Very straightforward. I like Lawrence O’Donnell, but he’s too smart to be doing that show. Rachel Maddow is Rachel Maddow, the ultimate wonk/dweeb who got a show, polished it, made it her own. She’s talented. The problem with everybody on MSNBC is none of them are funny, although that doesn’t prevent them from trying to be.
If MSNBC went off the air tomorrow, what difference would it make? If the Huffington Post went out of business tomorrow, what difference would it make?
In a broader sense, Baldwin says, it is a larger cultural failure, an American one. The United STates, he says, “is so preposterously judgmental now.”
The heart, the arteries of the country are now clogged with hate. The fuel of American political life is hatred. Who would ever dream that Obama would deserve to be treated the way he has been? The birth-certificate bullshit, which is just Obama’s version of Swiftboating. And all for the electoral nullification that seems like a cancer on the American system. But this is Roger Ailes. And Fox. And Breitbart. And this is all about hate. It’s Hate Incorporated. But the liberals have taken the bait and run in the same direction—and it’s just as corrosive. MSNBC, in its own way, is as full of shit, as redundant and as superfluous, as Fox.
I think America’s more fucked up now than it’s ever been. People are angry that in the game of musical chairs that is the U.S. economy, there are less seats at the table when the music stops. And at every recession, the music is stopping.
Va. judge voids state’s same-sex marriage ban, demolishes conservative dogma in the process
Add Virginia to the list. A federal judge last night overturned Virginia’s ban on same-sex marriage, saying that marriage is a fundamental right and that withholding it from some infringes upon the due process rights of those denied access to marriage.
U.S. District Judge Arenda L. Wright Allen, in her decision, dismissed state claims that legalizing same-sex marriage would create a new right, a key component of the anti-marriage-equality argument. And she demolished the patently false and offensive claims that children of same-sex couples are unfit to be parents, calling it an “unconstitutional, hurtful and unfounded presumption that same-sex couples cannot be good parents.”
Allen addressed another key element — that the state’s constitution had been amended by public referendum to define marriage narrowly as being between a man and a woman. That, she said, violates both the Declaration of Independence proclamation that “all men are created equal” and the constitutional responsibility of courts to act when individual rights are under assault — whether that assault comes from laws crafted by the government or by the people themselves.
While ever-vigilant for the wisdom that can come from the voices of our voting public, our courts have never long tolerated the perpetuation of laws rooted in unlawful prejudice. One of the judiciary’s noblest endeavors is to scrutinize laws that emerge from such roots.
When “state law discriminates impermissibly against members of a class in violation of the Equal Protection Clause,” the courts have a responsibility to step in unless the state law is “substantially related to an important governmental objective.” And the effort to limit the rights of same-sex couples is not “an important governmental objective” and, in fact, violates everything we purport to stand for as Americans.
Responses to the ruling on the right have included a call by state Delegate Bob Marshall for Allen to be impeached, but the right has to know this game is all but over. History is moving ahead on this issue without a right wing committed to antigay bigotry. As David S. Cohen and Dahlia Lithwick point out on Slate, there have 18 court rulings since the June 2013 Windsor decision gutted the federal Defense of Marriage Act, a decision that conservative Supreme Court Justice Antonin Scalia said in dissent would open up a floodgate of equality-based claims.
A survey of publicly available opinions shows that in the eight months since Windsor, 18 court decisions have addressed an issue of equality based on sexual orientation. And in those 18 cases, equality has won every single time. In other words, not a single court has agreed with Chief Justice Roberts that Windsor is merely about state versus federal power. Instead, each has used Windsor exactly as Justice Scalia “warned”—as a powerful precedent for equality.
This hasn’t all been about marriage. Twelve decisions have addressed a substantive aspect of marriage equality since Windsor, and equality has won in all 12—with the Virginia decision now joining decisions from Kentucky, New Mexico, Oklahoma, Utah, and West Virginia, and two decisions each in Illinois, New Jersey, and Ohio. But six other cases since Windsor have addressed different aspects of discrimination based on sexual orientation, such as discrimination on juries and employment benefits, and the side of equality has won in all six of those cases as well.
What is striking is not so much the volume, though 18 in nine months is remarkable, but the geography as Virginia joins conservative states like Kentucky, Oklahoma, Utah and West Virginia in the parade.
The momentum is clear, but the right remains a force and many of these decisions will wind their way to the high court. The question is whether Justice Kennedy will backtrack and buy into the state’s rights arguments made by Chief Justice Roberts — an unfortunate and easy out that could stall all of this. The volume of federal and state-level decisions, and the obvious shift in public opinion make that seem unlikely, which goes to show how far we have moved on this issue in so short a period of time.
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