You can read the full Instagram essay on wage theft here, at NJ Spotlight.
#Adele25: 25 tweets on ’25’
I bought the new Adele album Friday and, having now spent the weekend with it, offer some thoughts. I decided to tweet them out in what is an incremental music review. It’s a bit of an experiment — I’m curious to see what readers think, both about the use of individual tweets and the compilation of them at the end.
My basic take on “25” is that it is a nice pop record with some excellent songs, but lacks what makes her first two records so good. Let me know what you think.
#twitterreview #adele25 1. Adele, as my friend Bill sd, can sing the phone book & make it listenable.— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
#twitterreview #adele25 2. That hasn’t changed on “25,” even after throat issues & a baby.— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
#twitterreview #adele25 3. The voice remains 1 of most distinctive instruments in pop.— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
#twitterreview #adele25 4. & 25 is solid pop work (see “Send My Love”). But it’s not as good as “19” or “21,” her 1st 2 records.— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
#twitterreview #adele25 5. There’s a sameness 2 many songs — in tempo, theme & arrangement.— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
#twitterreview #adele25 6. That makes it feel more formulaic than albums 1 & 2— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
#twitterreview #adele25 7. & too much of it is vocal pyrotechnics — big singing atop big production.— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
#twitterreview #adele25 8. That’s what the pop audience wants & expects.— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
#twitterreview #adele25 9. It’s what made Whitney Houston & Mariah Carey stars.— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
#twitterreview #adele25 10. Adele has vocal chops 2 compete in this kind of pop climate.— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
#twitterreview #adele25 11. But what has made her unique is the restraint, the moments she turns soft,— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
#twitterreview #adele25 12. when the arrangements grow sparse, or the tempo shifts.— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
#twitterreview #adele25 13. & those r the moments on “25” that work best.— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
#twitterreview #adele25 14. Like on “A Million Years Ago,” w/its '60s vibe
— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
#twitterreview #adele25 15. Or the rock feel of “Sweetest Devotion”
— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
#twitterreview #adele25 16. & easy piano pop of “All I Ask”
— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
#twitterreview #adele25 17. It's during these moments — which close “25” —
— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
#twitterreview #adele25 18. Too much of “25” has been layered with big sound, which works on the single “Hello” & “I Miss You”
— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
#twitterreview #adele25 19. But leaves much of the record feeling cold and distant.
— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
#twitterreview #adele25 20. The production – & song choice – lead to a notable absence of soul.
— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
#twitterreview #adele25 21. Adele was never Al Green or Aretha, but there r moments on “19” & '“21”' that swing.
— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
#twitterreview #adele25 22. This isn't just about tempo. A song like “Take it All” on “21” catches a groove
— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
#twitterreview #adele25 23. As do “Crazy for You” & “Melt My Heart to Stone” on “19”
— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
#twitterreview #adele25 24. that recalls, if not Stax, then some of the best melancholy blues of the '60s.
— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
#twitterreview #adele25 25. In the end, her delivery is different. Gone is the jazz phrasing; in its place is an unmoored & often icy voice.
— Hank Kalet (@newspoet41) November 23, 2015
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#notapoem — just a rant
#stolenwagesnj
This is, partly, an experiment in form pulled together to show my class that we can tell stories using a variety of platforms. This one is generally called the Instagram essay, which has been used by writers like Neil Shea and Jeff Sharlet. I am working on a longer version of this for NJ Spotlight.
Let me know what you think of this as a storytelling medium.
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Brief Notes: Mersault, Musa and the Paris attacks
This is making the rounds on Facebook and Instagram and is worth reading.
I would edit it some — we should pray for Paris, if we are to pray, but also for Beirut and Baghdad, and the refugees fleeing violence, and the Jews being attacked in Jerusalem, and the Palestinians horded into camps, and African Americans who continue to be victimized by our racist past and present, and the Latinos who are viewed as somehow less valuable and who have been made the convenient scapegoats of American politics, and… and…. But I can’t pray. And not because I am irreligious. I can’t pray because if I were to pray, then I would do nothing but pray.
I am reading The Mersault Investigation, Kamel Daoud’s novel written as a response to Albert Camus’ The Stranger. Daoud’s point of departure is the murder of the unnamed Arab on the beach and the conceit is that the Arab — actually, the Algerian — has a name and a family. It is written in the voice of Harun, the brother of Musa, and is an effort to reclaim a sense of humanity taken from not only Musa, but from Harun and from all of Algeria by the West. The Stranger essentially posits a hierarchy of importance, Daoud’s novel claims, placing the Frenchman Mersault above the Algerian, consigning the Algerian death to footnote status in a novel about the absurdity of life (the trial in The Stranger is only nominally about the murder and centers around the speaker’s alienation).
The response to the awful events in France is totally appropriate, but as this meme makes clear it is wholly insufficient and betrays a western chauvinism that is at least a part of what creates this cycle of violence. The French dead, for whom we should mourn and for whom we should seek justice, are like Mersault. The dead in Beirut and Baghdad and elsewhere, perhaps because of the regularity with which deaths occur in these places but also because too many of us think these dead lack the same humanity as the victims in France, also deserve justice. But they are no longer mourned in the west, no longer even mentioned. They have been stripped of their names. They are all Musa’s.
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