Press Critique: More Word Choice Follies

Passing Opinion Off as Neutral Reporting is Bad Writing
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Press Critique: More Word Choice Follies

Passing Opinion Off as Neutral Reporting is Bad Writing

Hank Kalet
Aug 15
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Today’s lesson on word choice comes from The Washington Post, which published a story advancing a speech in which Vice President — and Democratic presidential nominee — Kamala Harris was set to unveil price controls designed to manage the cost of groceries.

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The Post — like The New York Times — appears to be asking their reporters to become more creative in their writing. The upshot is not a more interesting approach to storytelling, but the kind of overwriting and overly broad — and cliched — categorizing that should raise questions of bias among readers.

This kind of journalistic writing drives me crazy. It pretends at objectivity but uses language that is not so subtly presents the writer’s point of view.

Adjectives and adverbs — and most other qualifiers — insert the writer into the story. They imply point of view.

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Hank Kalet is a poet and freelance journalist. He is the economic needs reporter for NJ Spotlight, teaches journalism at Rutgers University and writing at Middlesex County College and Brookdale Community College. He writes a semi-monthly column for the Progressive Populist. He is a lifelong fan of the New York Mets and New York Knicks, drinks too much coffee and attends as many Bruce Springsteen concerts as his meager finances will allow. He lives in South Brunswick with his wife Annie.

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